Self_MyDreamVacation

Step1

What is my dream vacation?

Actually, I have not thought about it.

 

humm... First of all, I have to 벗어나다 to make our vacation complete.

Because I want to enjoy my vacation with any distraction.

 

There are some of things bother me at that time I enjoy something.

First, It is about money.

부족 of money sometimes make my vacation ruin.

Regardless what I want to eat or what I want to enjoy, 부족 of money restrict my choices.

 

Second, It is my job.

Working is related in time I can spend time during vacation. because if I want to go vacation, I have to apply a leave for office. 

If I can't have proper leave from work. I don't enjoy vacation well, or I can't go vacation.

 

I think I am writing it dowm without hopes.

But when reason to bother out vacation are resolved, I could have my dream vacation.

 

 

Step2

What is my dream vacation?

Actually, I have not thought about it.

 

humm... First of all, I have to escape to make our vacation complete.

Because I want to enjoy my vacation without any distraction.

 

There are some of things bother me at that time I enjoy something.

First, It is about money.

Short money sometimes make my vacation ruin.

Regardless what I want to eat or what I want to enjoy, short money restrict my choices and plan.

 

Second, It is about my job.

Working is related in time I can spend during vacation.

because if I want to go vacation, I have to apply a leave for office. 

If I can't have proper leaves from work. I can't enjoy vacation well, even go vacation.

 

I think I am writing it dowm hopeless.

But when It is resolved, I could have my dream vacation.

 

Step3 - corrected by grammarly

What is my dream vacation?
Actually, I have not thought about it.

Humm... First of all, I have to escape to make our vacation complete.
Because I want to enjoy my vacation without any distractions.

There are some things that bother me at that time I enjoy something.
First, It is about money.
Fast money sometimes makes my vacation ruin.
Regardless of what I want to eat or what I want to enjoy, fast money restrict my choices and plan.

Second, It is about my job.
Working is related to the time I can spend during vacation.
Because if I want to go on vacation, I have to apply for a leave for office. 
If not, I can't enjoy vacation well, even go on vacation.

I think I am writing it down hopelessly.
But after It is resolved, I could have my dream vacation.

 

 

Step4 - corrected by papago, grammarly

What is my dream vacation?
Actually, I have not thought about it.

Humm... First of all, I have to escape to make our vacation complete.
Because I want to enjoy my vacation without any distractions.

There are some things that bother me at that time I enjoy something.
First, It is about money.
A lack of money sometimes makes my vacation ruin.
Regardless of what I want to eat or what I want to enjoy, A lack of money restrict my choices and plan.

Second, It is about my job.
Working is related to the time I can spend during vacation.
Because if I want to go on vacation, I have to apply for a leave for office. 
If not, I can't enjoy vacation well, even go on vacation.

I think I am writing it down hopelessly.
But after It is resolved, I could have my dream vacation.

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